This is an excerpt from my writing which I hope to publish by the year 2035 (gotta give myself some wiggle room). Let me know what you think, and please be honest.

"Life is a quest for love, sex, money, and happiness,
But sometimes a lifetime is not enough.
Everyone is looking for pure life which one would think equals happiness.
In my theory, pure life is the good and the bad, the blow of both worlds.
There can never really be a complete life without wholeness.

A smile can be the medicine for a bad day,
But that bad day is the motivation for a smile.
My melancholy can only last until a better day.
Life’s valley has twists and turns.
But this reality won’t dismay.

Taking miscellaneous things for granted will accelerate an already short life...."